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"Blood..." was heard in the depths of the mysterious darkness. The voice was grim, powerful and husky, like the one of a man begging mercy to Death.
The dying boy didn't do anything to save himself. He already had many blood liters splattered over all the stone soil. What if he had fear or courage, with that wound in the abdomen not even one hundred angels would save him. He only stared with cold sweat to the dark background, the last thing he would do would be the face to the enemy that would give him the last strike.
Little by litte a dark figure got out of the shadows, being illuminated by his right with the tinkling light of a weak torch. First his face, which seemed a lot like the one of a skull, with thoose dark sharp amber eyes, and of even darker deep sight, with a dead feeling. Then the giant fingers followed by the huge hands. Later the runed-decorated gorila legs. The boy quited his courage, watching that creature's soul made him want to bleed faster. The creature was taking slow steps but seemed to proceed a lot. The seconds were lost into the boy's thoughts and soon the face of the creature was over his.
"It's coming..." he thought while he irregularly breathed and suffered. The horrible index of the beast touched the wound and a huge pain blinded his conscience. The lost seconds came back in unconsciousness, and when this was over, the boy opened his eyes and saw the creature, pale, stiff, cold and lying next to him. He touched his old wound, then his heart and next his wrist veins while he recovered a nervous breathing. He couldn't believe it. He was alive in body and soul.
"Blood..."
The dying boy didn't do anything to save himself. He already had many blood liters splattered over all the stone soil. What if he had fear or courage, with that wound in the abdomen not even one hundred angels would save him. He only stared with cold sweat to the dark background, the last thing he would do would be the face to the enemy that would give him the last strike.
Little by litte a dark figure got out of the shadows, being illuminated by his right with the tinkling light of a weak torch. First his face, which seemed a lot like the one of a skull, with thoose dark sharp amber eyes, and of even darker deep sight, with a dead feeling. Then the giant fingers followed by the huge hands. Later the runed-decorated gorila legs. The boy quited his courage, watching that creature's soul made him want to bleed faster. The creature was taking slow steps but seemed to proceed a lot. The seconds were lost into the boy's thoughts and soon the face of the creature was over his.
"It's coming..." he thought while he irregularly breathed and suffered. The horrible index of the beast touched the wound and a huge pain blinded his conscience. The lost seconds came back in unconsciousness, and when this was over, the boy opened his eyes and saw the creature, pale, stiff, cold and lying next to him. He touched his old wound, then his heart and next his wrist veins while he recovered a nervous breathing. He couldn't believe it. He was alive in body and soul.
"Blood..."
A writing that I did in a "Literature Creation Class". Actually I liked a lot the text, maybe I use it in one of my books xD.
The class was really cool, each one had it's own style, and seemed to be very diverse between the other autors. The teacher first made us write a half-page text where the first and last word were the same. We all write and after a while, as some others were finnishing, each one read his writing and everybody opined. All of them were great xD
And well, this was mine. I also made another one where we had to include a part where a character murmured something to another one something in the ear, that something had to be relevant during the story and that it had to be revealed in the end.
Have a nice day/night/morning/dawn/whateverxD
In Spañish (xD): [link]
The class was really cool, each one had it's own style, and seemed to be very diverse between the other autors. The teacher first made us write a half-page text where the first and last word were the same. We all write and after a while, as some others were finnishing, each one read his writing and everybody opined. All of them were great xD
And well, this was mine. I also made another one where we had to include a part where a character murmured something to another one something in the ear, that something had to be relevant during the story and that it had to be revealed in the end.
Have a nice day/night/morning/dawn/whateverxD
In Spañish (xD): [link]
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Wow, this was so good. Original and deep. And scary. Kudos.